DESTINY GAMES - Reviews

It was perfect! Perfect! Down to the last minute detail!

Shiny, extra charged balls ✨️ ready to dominate

The story starts of as wild but the details are clear and understood and as always the world building is great and the Mc is good and the refrences are perfectly timed, the story itself has a great potential som I’m looking forward for more.

im liking this alot so far. i really like how your mcs think, as well as their ideals.
this one is similar to legion, so hes peak!

Alright, I have read 5 chapters so far and it seems interesting. Naturally it helps to know that this is the author of GREED which I like very much. Also the "power system" or well the glimpse that we were allowed to see seems rather interesting. Fans being power (at least temporary power) is rather unique. At least I haven't seen that anywhere I think. If I have then it wasn't very memorable. It also brings a unique perspective on the hero/villain world building where an awakened is either a hero or a villain (in society) depending on both their ability and personality. Since fans are power and Heroes have fans this could really make for interesting situations and characters. So I'm excited.
One thing that I hope you do better than in GREED is the placement of the pay wall. I think that it was just too early in GREED. Or well at least considering how you wrote the beginning it was too early. I think more people would have been interested if the free chapters started later. I don't know how much control an author has over that or if its webnovel that has a say in it. However I think that you should carefully consider where to put it here.

Brother, is it good to start another one if you haven't finished the other novel yet?
I have seen many authors, the quality of their novels has decreased like this.
90% confirmed that the second novel has more filler content than other novels. such as conversations or thoughts between fights - women or insignificant characters' thoughts about the mc - forced situations where random characters try to engage with the mc. And everything that is not related to the story and is repeated in all novels.
In short, just pay attention to that part of talking or additional explanations and people's thoughts exactly in the middle of the fight (I'm begging you), you want to give only a pure fight with notes about the movements after the fight.
I know you have your own thoughts. Good job. Good luck.

I’m liking the modern setting so far, i think u shouldn’t over complicate the world setting like you did with greed because i got to a point where i got confused whats even going on lol

Since you kept asking for reviews here it is. Jokes aside, awesome mc, the ability isn’t just the typical copy everything become OP. Also good comedy. Interesting version of the normal tower climbing trope.