Descendant of Sloth - Reviews

I feel like i just scammed.  I purchased coins to read this story but then I found out too late that its been months since it was last updated. Quite contrary to the promised 2-3 updates per day.  So disappointing.

I've already read the first 8 chapters, beside the fact that i discovered it (through my thread) only two hours ago :'D This book is amazing! And so well written! I will definitely read the last three chapters as soon as i finish school today. Really well done, author! You are amazing!!!

really great story, it starts off a little slow. but once it hits its strides its an amazing experince, there a few archs in the story that are all eciting and help advance the story in a natural way. with the exceptuon of a few mistakes here and there that in no way deminsh the story i highly recomnd it.magic ✅sowrds ✅op mc ✅intreging events ✅fun adventures ✅loot✅power ups ✅world shaking events ✅haram ✅what else can u ask for. go read now.

The world is interesting and has alot of potential. One thing I am worried about the progress in strength in these 40 chapters is alot, so either it will be a short book or more strength levels will be added in the future

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I like your work,and your story is very good your writing style amazing i will read all your novels for sure i read many books but I didn’t satisfied with any your novel is first i read ít completed and I’m really satisfied?

    "You should be able to levitate things too, in a few days, and when you do, it'll take another month to master just the basics. I think you can push objects, though. Here, let's try to see if you can create compressed air around you. That's the basics for pretty much everything we can do," he said.

Before Leonardo could utter another sentence, he was found himself standing before the door of the deans office.

Umm, the novel is really amazing in my opinion and has great potential, but it is kinda taking too long to start with the world and development and stuff, because until now I have noticed that the chapters are like 35% info dump, 20% describing the room or the clothes or whatever, 25% s*x scenes, and 20% actual story development and stuff, I would really like to focus more on the development because it becomes kinda annoying when I read a new chapter everyday only to find that 50% or something of the chapter is just info about whatever something he is using instead of just a simple description, makes me want to leave the novel until it accumulates like 500 chapters to have a decent read and get a decent development. But hey I love the story in general and can’t wait to see him being OP against the people who will find out how strong he and his family are later on, that’s why I keep waiting wanting to see what’s going to happen, but it just doesn’t go that way in the story, or it is just not moving on to see how he is going to make the city his the chamber of commerce workings or the sect and stuff like that you know. Thanks for reading my opinion, and sorry if you take offense to my criticism. (English is not my native language, so there may be grammar mistakes here and there in the comment, so sorry in advance)

He had not done anything wrong. It was his evil kin. They had come. They had done this.

I start sprinting through the grass towards the city. I seem to be pretty fast when sprinting, not anywhere near the speed I want to achieve later on but compared to the running speed of a human I'm quite the bit faster.

"You.. who are you? At least you are not Arata.."