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DEMON WITHIN
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So it's unfortunate but the early chapters of this story are just really bad if you're not a huge fan of super cliché this Young Master this Queen this Seat etc. etc Tianxia tropes.

To start with (I don't think I need to spoiler something that happens in the first chapter), Tang is reincarnated to a Tianxia world as a teenager who worked herself to death trying to provide for her comatose brother. Does she use her painful experiences to be thoughtful and careful? Does she worry about what's going to happen to her brother? Nope. Just completely ignore anything about her pre-reincarnation life after chapter 1, because the story certainly does.

Instead she has the personality of a 12 year old chuuni with a very dubious grasp of reality. I will say that this story does get better later on, and at some point it even remembers her backstory (briefly). But you have to wade through a lot of mediocrity in order to reach that point. It's too bad because I really love kitsune.
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Does the translation get better ?
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intriguing

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