The story is original and kinf of interesting but the MC is too much, he is dense and always act to prove the author's ideas no matter of the consistency.
So the story is resultoriented and as the author don't care about consistencies and nonesenses, the story flow is unnatural, forced, boring.
English isn't my 1st language so that's why mistakes in the writing that insert contradictions is disturbing for me... I'm not stupid so i can understand what the author mean but it's repeatitive mitake so it's TIRING!!! I'm not a tranlator... why should i translate it anyway, it's not my job, FFS!