Death’s Hold - Reviews

This is interesting. Thumbs up author! This is reallly nice!

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Boss Luo is the best I like him!I uesd to read this from web translated in my country and then I fall in love with this novel, thank you so much translator(s) I like you too!

there are a lot of things i like and a lot i dislike about this novel i'll start with likes as bullet points-the MC is smart and decently strong and stays pretty strong throughout-i really like the shamelessness of the MC its really funny-the chapters are really long it feels well thought out so while it says over 1000 chapters you really get a lot for that 1000+negatives-everything has a story and the author must tell you the story of everything(example: theres a guy about to stab the MC with a sword, it goes and starts talking about the guy, who he is, what his childhood till this point was like, what he likes and dislikes and why you should care about him. then it talks about the backround of the sword what it likes and dislikes why you should care about it and how cool of a sword it really is. you can actually skip 10+ chapters in most of the fights and come back with the sword still about to stab the MC)-filler plot. he loves to tell you on the spot why things matter this story is 99% filler. i can describe the whole 700+ chapters i have read in a few sentences if i ignore the filler.-personality change: early on in the very first few chapters they introduce the female lead, shes bratty, smart, spoiled, vindictive, strong and likes to smiles alot and talk and laugh at you. she is out to get the MC. later the author decides he doesn't think she should be like this so now she is. quiet, rarely smiles, cold beauty, loving. and the author makes another girl who has her original personality to replace her.-translation quality is low, you can read and understand it most of the time but there are tons and tons of errors (translator thinks Gift of gap is the saying instead of GAB) this goes on for many many chapters. tons of random words missing or the totally wrong word in its place.overall i read 700+ chapters and by read i mean i skipped 1 out of every 10 chapters (so around 70 total) because the filler was getting to me. i will never finish this i can't read more filler anymore but it was a good way to kill a week of isolation.

It is best novel I read.MC is good, story good, characters good, world good. It says Harem but it seems like a couple only and doesn't seem to change. I mind either path. But good to know which way story goes. Some repeat of same description of green and red colors at different times for different things. But good writing. also don't forget to have chapter of rest and normal life after fights. I think it would be good.It is great. recommended.

Awesome novel, inspired by the lord of mysteries and written by the author of warlock of the Magus world. Awesome novel plz webnovel translate this, ????

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bem, eu particularmente gostei do livro, entretanto, tem tantos capítulos de vários personagens diferentes. isso é interessante para a construção do mundo, no entanto, fico me perguntando a relevância de certos capítulos...bem, tirando isso, a história é boa, meio devagar mas boa.

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Only giving full reviews so that some public can come and chat with me so that we can together criticize this as i alone cant do it as it will me lonely and i dont want feel lonely, Beleive it

Review at CH162.. The beast taming aspect of the story is done really well as Karl tries to navigate the path to making his tames better. The writing and world development overall dont leave much to be desired. The pacing kind of feels like we're following a slice of life with some combat here and there. My main complaint so far would have to be the character development.A lot of the characters, to include MC, seem rather flat and dont have much of a personality. Other than being stronger, it doesnt seem like the MC has any sort of goal nor do we really get a peek at his mentality. The tamed monsters are arguably more entertaining and individualized than any of the human characters we meet so far.I really enjoy the novel and wait for my chapters daily, just hope we can get more full bodied characters

I gotta say, I got this story on my daily reco and I'm glad that I took the plunge to read it. It's quite a fun lighthearted read. I ended up reading up to the privileged chapters (chapter 43)The MC is a fun character. To me, she comes off almost borderline psychotic with the way she talks to her pet owl and system out loud, thereby having random people looking at her weirdly. She's got a very nonchalant attitude, but that also doesn't stop her from giving the same energy back whenever people try her.I like the way the author didn't do the typical "oh I gotta get away from the MC and co. to be an extra!!!"...while doing things that get the MC and their crew's attention. MC here legit goes out of her way to stay with the MC here because she knows she needs to help them, especially seeing how things are changing.I think the story is a bit too early to judge the other characters as atm they need fleshing out, but I trust that the author will get into that once we get more chapters and the more she interacts with the world.Right now as the story is still a bit early, we're only getting snippets here and there of the actual world, but from what we've seen so far it seems promising.While there are some tropes that are reminiscent of other novels of a similar genre, (TNE as one example) I think the author did a good job of putting their own twist into it that kept me engaged.There are a couple of minor grammatical errors and typos, but nothing that would throw you off of your immersion to the story.Now the big thing. The author put paid chapters starting from chapter 20 and while I personally think that it's too early, I hope you readers continue with it anyway. I found it's worth spending my coins on the story as I've found it to be an enjoyable read so far.