Death Contract (PUBLISHED) - Reviews

One foot in front of the other

I love this story, please author update before I get to the last chapter.

First review. Yayyy !!!! And I like the story. Hope there are more uploads like atleast 10 chapters every week. Keep it up author !!!

Definitely the best story out of this batch. Even IF the story sucks later, the writing quality is very high these 60 chapters. It's the first time I see a fluffy Xianxia with other elements added to the story. All perfectly executed cliches! It's slowly progressing to a serious xianxia. I have a lot of high expectations but also a bit skeptical since I'm not sure where it's going. I can only hope there's no Harem and Master Deer being Main Heroine.

I think this book showcases a scene that particularly intruiges me, especially the experiment (I LOVE EXPERIMENTS as science geek myself). So it already got me in a hook! I would like the fellow readers to take a glance on this book and read the chapters. I highly recommend this. It started good hopefully the consistency continues.There were some inconsistencies with grammar and sentence structure but are just minimal. Keep it up!

Nice actually..Thanks for the story... Please do update and tell how u going to write do I can start following for update.✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️???????

This author infodumps for like 60% of the story, and when he’s not he’s wasting chapters on something frivolous. Secondly, the premise was very enjoyable but the execution is way off. There’s zero buildup. Finally, the author had the nerve to refer to black people as literal slaves (that is the exact word the translator used) who fawned over those with yellow skin, and the paleryou were the higher your status. That turned me off completely. I liked it enough to read up to that point despite the many flaws of this author, but the blatant racism is a no go.

He needed to remain focused, after all he had a goal and mission to achieve. However, despite her condition, it appeared she was as bright and brilliant as the rumours said and he felt it would not be easy to broach the topic let alone convince her to agree.

Saitama said with almost no expressions on his face.

"You're pretty calm young boy" God

Jahn awoke, the warm light of dawn setting the attic's dust aflame. He sneezed, shook his aching head. He looked around him, at the dusty attic, with its ancient wardrobe looming foreboding in the corner. He remembered. Jahn swore to himself. How could he have messed this up so badly? He was so incapable that panic could overtake him at any moment. His failure filled him with despair. Stalking over to the creaky bed in the corner, he wrapped a bandage around his head, and looked out into the warmth of the day. How could I miss my one chance to break free from insignificance, to be someone.

It's good . Overall interesting thing to read for now, not all that much else I can really say?