Second Review, Same Novel, Different Story
P.S. You asked for a review in author's note so I will.
I've been reading this web novel for a while now, and while I genuinely enjoy the story, there are definitely some areas that could use improvement. The plot is engaging, and the characters are well-developed, which keeps me invested. I can see the author’s passion for storytelling, and it’s evident that their writing is getting better with each chapter.
However, the upload schedule can be quite frustrating. I often find myself eagerly checking for updates, only to be met with long gaps between chapters. It disrupts the flow of the story, and I really wish it was more consistent.
I’ve also noticed that some of the combat scenes feel a bit childish. While I love the action, it would be great to see more variety and creativity in how these battles play out.
Overall, I really hope the author continues to work on this story. There’s so much potential here, and I’m rooting for you to see it through to the end (or at least let us know if they decide to drop it).