Days of my Life: REWRITE - Reviews

this story is soooo slow and boring that even for free limited reading time, I had to give up on it . don't waste your time trying to read it

I liked the first 40 chapters. It was pretty chill like a slice of life story. I hope we get the rest of the chapters

My cultivation have been regressed as I cannot comprehend the meaning of Dao in this dogsh** novel mantra scripture. I have met millions of heart demons and vomitted million liters of blood in my cultivation due to the backlash of this dogsh** novel mantra scripture because I can't understand the meaning of Dao in these plotholes and common cliches.

Good novel good story  good work  and good Quality ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

where the **** are the chapters? where the **** are the chapters? where the **** are the chapters? where the **** are the chapters? where the **** are the chapters?

Love it! Overall a vary good story/novel. Writing is solid with only few mistakes. Very fleshed out story, characters and world story. My only concern is with  some characters. It is hard to remember all of them. My advice for You is this: It is of great help for the author to have a notebook with all characters( their history, character, relationship, etc.). With it You can make some sort of glossary for Your novel. Then You can put it somewhere for us( readers).

Its honesty okay, and just that its okay. The paragraphs are a bIt too long so its a mouthful to read that big chunk of text. The character interactIons are a bIt rough. I’d say give it a try as it could be good but it was hard for me to read. Best of luck author!

I like the way how the character has been described, easy to read and sticky to keep reading. Waiting for new material and stories!

"Hey there," she croaked. Not having used her voice for a long time, she started coughing and Sean immediately poured her water and called the doctor and nurses in for examination. They asked her many questions and did many tests on her physical reactions before they turned to Sean in amazement.

omg every fan-fic, none could do him justice and keep his hair. poor guy

''Asfi, go and tell the others that I'll be back soon.'' with that said he vanished a swirl of wind and with it Asfi took one last look at Hestia and Bell before bowing her head silently. Turning away, she

The celebration lasted until morning then Arslan was called by Commander Beatrice to her tent, Arslan saluted but then was beconed to sit.