Dark Slit: He Who Defies - Reviews

This is what i want for M.C and worldbackground.speed:Mid-slow .. very tasty.. read it and enjoy the story.. so update speed is slow but i am wating next chapters....??????

My favorite novel ------Cultural Invasion into IsekaiMy Senior Brother is Too SteadyMages Are Too OPI Am the God of Games............................

Hmm, I read the raws, the story is so good at the beginning, but as the story progress through about 100+ chaps, I feel like the story and the focus of the novel swayed a bit or so...... Also it looks like the MC become a little or quite weak compared to the strenght he shows in the starter parts of the story. But overall, I dropped it midway, but hey the start is quite good, unfortunately it seems it is losing its potential bit by bit.

Good story here I am really liking it. Nice characters good story development and world background. The only problem is updates don't come fast enough

Once again, another "I got a super op beast right from the start"MCs name has been changed to Mike, since WN has been changing tons of trial read names to western-ish names.  For that I give it a low translation rating.Story development is that he gets maxed out charisma that only works on beasts. That's it. It was satisfying to read about John being eaten alive by bugs, but that's it.MC is a poor boy with a poor family, and he needs to carry them. Sounds exactly like that other novel that was on trial reads a few weeks ago where the MC was named "Link". Even the starting is pretty similar.OP Beast checkpoor family checkimmediate beast tide to show off beast, check.There's nothing that particularly stands out, the MC is a bit dumb, I would think that after a failed attempt at asking a girl on a date would make me question the charisma stat. If anything, if this world is filled with beasts, has he never approached a beast to see if his charisma worked? It only worked when he was choosing a pet? How does that work? How did that dragon sense him from who knows how far away and was attracted to him. Was none of the beasts in the city attracted to him? Big plot hole.

It was easy to follow and engaging. The characters had a good sold design which is always nice. Keep up the good work!

Can't believe I found this one! It's so damn good. Really, OP hero, cold character... Dungeons, hunters. The story plot reminds me a lot with Solo Leveling, but I don't bother since this has its own intriguing plot. Like how the author has done so far, will be a keep for reading in my spare time!Thank you!

Hi, Everyone, Please give my first work a chance to entertain you, I have thought a lot into this before writing this And would love all the remarks you would give , good or bad, if it helps or encourages me bring out better content , I will take it to heart. Thank you and be well

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Charm: 1.7

" More like what a disaster " I mumbled while pinching the bridge of my nose and looking at the desk . Erza elbowed me before Simon finally pulled a chair out in front of her . " Yeah, what a coincidence " said Erza while scratching the back of her head. " So Erza, are you going to be part taking in the nomaniations for the new School Body President this year? " asked Simon while plopping down in the seat in front of her . "Sure, I mean only if Jellal is going to be a candidate too" she said while turning her face toward mine " What?" I asked while looking up to be met by her gaze " You heard me, don't pretend that you are deaf now. " she said while looking me dead in the eye.