I like how you insert information and short comments there author. At first I was overwhelm reading the first chapter. Slightly confused because I can't get the grasp of what's going on. But amazed how you can describe the movements and techniques your characters did in the story. Instead of reading, it feels like I'm watching a fight in a crowd with commentators describing every techniques the fighters did. It's super cool. I'm still reading at the beginning chapter, and I'm looking forward of your book. Keep up the good work author!