Dark desire: Getting his revenge - Reviews

I've read the first two chapters and I was surprised at how visceral the fight scenes were. The story itself has an intense vibe, I can clearly see what the author is going for. The grammar mistakes like maintaining auxiliary pronoun structure.

it is lock on 8 really? I mean it is a really good story and I like it but seriously why did you lock it on 8 but anyways keep up the good work and your doing great

Nice story. Cant keep it down. Worth my coins. I recommended for those that love mixture of intense romance, action and a bit of magic[img=recommend]

Hi friends. Thanks for your support. The book is on editing. If you are an editor and interested in working with me on editing my books, feel free to contact me. Your help is appreciated.

I love the way the chapters are organized
Nice writing style and story idea
This novel has great potentials
Worth the read!
Thumbs up to the author for a job well done

Though i have not read the whole plot yet , i am sure this book has potential. The way the author walks you through this story is wounderful and definitely a worthy read for my time i spent. good work author.

"Dark Desire: A Vengeful Odyssey" captivated me with its intricate plot and masterful storytelling. The protagonist's raw passion for revenge was both compelling and intense, drawing me into a world of shadows and hidden motives. The narrative weaved a web of intrigue, leaving me on the edge of my seat. The exploration of human nature through the lens of vengeance was thought-provoking, making it a thrilling read that lingered in my mind long after the final pages. A must-read for fans of psychological thrillers seeking an electrifying journey.

Wonderful story. I have read and got hooked from the beginning. So many things are unfolding as we read forward becoming more interesting. Update more chapters soon. we are waiting

Wow. what are ending. I cant get over all the twist and turn and the ending is really something else. the suspense is too much hope to see a second book

Ever chapter I read is amazing. Keep up the good work. The story keeps on getting better and better. I am surprised about the portal and the power it contain to sent Omar burned up

Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!

well I must say this is a unique story, a dead hunting a living.

but what I noticed emmy is that u write almost like I do when I describe a scene or an appearance.
well everyone should give ur book a chance, even though u locked ur chapters early enough