DARK ASCENSION - Reviews

another garbage novel with "Chinese racism" where the author wishes that all races of other nations would die to benefit Chinese people and another useless MC "who is busy collecting the meat pies falling from the sky". no creativity, no proper world build (except for saying that almost all other nations people are dead and that Chinese are great and supreme). Bunch of bull crap is what this is.

I don't know much about the story yet, but I can see a potential in the plot. Some punctuation errors around the dialogues can be improved with a little editing. Keep writing :)

one of the best webnovels i've ever read, the author did really great making the characters alive with their interactions, its really enjoyable to read, also the autor kindly answers your comments and its also funny himself, i highly recommend reading this.

Story is interesting and captivating only problem the magic system is complex and takes time to understand. The latest chapter gives the MC a big boost in magic too quickly?

favorite story in this app i hope the author will release more story like this?

'That kid was stronger than I expected him to be,' thought Orochimaru as he grimaced in pain. 'His Wind and Lightning Chakra really messed me up. I will need a few days to recover from these internal injuries.'

Tamaki held up a container holding some sort of translucent brown liquid. "Wadda ya make of this?"

Parts of the forest looked dark even in the bright daytime, varying shafts of light clearly visible against the dark green shadows that grew darker the deeper she looked.

she wore nicest dress from her wardrobe. her petite figure can bare any color and style, she was going to complete her 15 years but her figure development growth was in a good speed, Her breast was getting nice and round and slightly becoming heavier for her body . she dressed yellow traditional outfit,  she even put some rose petal's balm on her lips which she made. she was now expert in homemade cosmetics. her father was making some little profit by selling all the stuff she made.