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I absolutely love this story. I wish this would be updated though, I would love read volume 3!the characters i always will love, especially asuna and kirito
with the author's experince from tos and hoa this novel is gonna be fire. just read and i want more if only i could travel through and binge read the entire thing without having to wait
Disclaimer: I don't normally write reviews without reading much more chapters, but since the work doesn't have any others I'll give it a start. BTW I'm leaving this review at Ch. 17.The writing quality is excellent as well as the characters that you meet. There is a lot of things that aren't mentioned at the beginning which seems a little lazy, but it might also be a method of making you think about things and want to read more to answer your questions. Can't say much about background as you don't see much at the moment. Though the update schedule seems quite concerning. Definitely has potential and has a good start, a few clichés here and there, but those make a good novel if used right. Honestly I think it will be a good novel at least and hope the author continues to make it work. Good Luck to you author! P.S. If it gets up to Ch. 100 someday I'll make another review then.
Story is decent, but needs more improvemnt in terms of world building, the characters need to be fleshed out more so that they dont seem like npc's. another thing is harem tag just annoys me man just make a 1 on 1 relation between the mc and the love intrest rather than him going around baning multiple other heroines.
