CRIMSON RUIN - Reviews

An interesting story ,,but there is need to develop the character of the  protagonist ,as Alex being a second gen hier of Ambrose family -the family which influences the whole world so I think u need to develop the Alex character more ,,AND A HUGE REQUEST PLZZ MAKE ALEX MEET DEBBIE SOON

Amazing, simply amazing. It lives up to the quality of MotivatedSloth's other works.I could feel the characters confusion when he couldn't understand anything being said. Go Read!

It’s a good story but I can’t help but want the author to concentrate on farming more. Plus why does song hi have to keep reminding the mc about the farm book . It makes the MC seriously look dumb. Plus there are too many systems it makes the protagonist lose it’s appealing point. Protagonists are suppose to be special right. It a nice story line but I don’t really like how the characters are.

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I like it, like it, like it! That's all I can say. From the first chapter this story has captured my heart, and I'll gladly continue reading it! Characters are very three-dimensional, some you can sympathize with, some not. The world background is seriously cool, if not a little dark, but that's the charm that enraptured me. To be honest, the first chapter felt like a delusional dream, and I loved it! I want more!

So i really like what i've read so far! I'm a huge fan of the whole ''agent/FBI'' vibe in the beginning, it really sets the scene. Since there's only five chapters so far, i haven't been able to fully get a sight - but what i've read so far, was really good! So it's a five star review from me <3

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-Would be that he... does not do it to get my attention?

What?

   "Vi, wait! Wait!" She said while took her steps slow. However, that girl kept on walking.

Tomorrow I shall spend my 3 power stones(used them today), keep up the good work!

Sorry for my late reply. I really bussy in my real life. Also I though that this story cant gain attention for more readers. If you can help me, I really feeling gratefull. I want to know about your oppinion. Is this story have good plot? Is this story word's good? Because I am not english native, I have low esteem about my words. Thank you because you look this story.