creations of aurther world - Reviews

i gave 5 star based on his other novel an i will start reading this one wene it gets to 50 i love your novels keep doing what you are doing

Kaya•Shadow Hunter (Night Hunters’ Leader) asked, “Are you the Goblin that killed Manster•Moonwalker? Hmph, who would have thought that an Archdruid would actually die by such a despicable monster’s hand. Prepare to die. Today, I will annihilate you in the name of the Moon Goddess Elune.”“Punish me in the name of the Moon? F*ck, do you think you’re Sailor Moon?”That was funny and I finished all 60 chapters and I hope this is selected.

its a very good book if you are into stories that evolve around history and facts. hint of past present and foreshadowing is amazing the future chapters have a lot of potential

This book is unique in its right. What I admire the most is the eccentric writing which I noticed since its in stark contrast to mine.Writing Quality: Its great. I find myself able to follow the story and even the more specialised terminology well because its presented quite well.Character Design: I sorta feel that it's lacking a bit, not in the sense of development but purely design. I'm heavily biased towards visualising my characters and I feel like I don't get enough of that.Story Development: it kinda stunted for him in some of the chapters, but then went back to a great flow. Overall its good.World Background: As far as I've read is great and keeps building up with the mechanics as well.Overall great story that I recommend to readers.

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Very interesting premise. And I like the writing so far. Keep up the good work! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

This novel started off so good but author had to fxxked it up.Why made thing so fxxking complicated.From trying to find his missing father, to  finding his girlfriend/lover who apparently got send back in time.I regret reading this.

Very interesting story, good character development and great story flow. The only thing I can suggest was to keep the consistency of your story. If you can make more character development, try it because your characters in the story is one of the most important part in the plot that you wanted to have... thats all

It's such a promising novel.I definetly enjoyed reading it.?????????????????????????????????????????

[MOSHIMOSHI?!]

So, fill your life with colour & accomplishment.

Oliver followed as he prayed he would get used to the burning pain in his thighs when he rode Ash.