WTF is going on with the translator? Sorry, but if you have internal problems, at least *COMMUNICATE* with the readers instead of f***ing us all over like this. The novel is almost unreadable in the later story with so many chapter skips.
Very very interesting story to read. Its easy to read and the MC is soloing, not doing some harem stuff which is common in another novel which I like. Kudos to the author for writing this amazing novel
If you're reading this review, then I guess you stumbled upon this novel by chance. Let me tell you one thing, fellow daoists: you will definitely regret not reading this novel! Even if you are not used to reading this particular genre, you'll still be immersed in the story because of the author's impeccable writing style. Add it on your library now and let's find out how Han Jing would fare in the app Races: Online! Good luck, author-sama! I'm not saying you should update often, but you should! ? We're waiting for the next chapters~ ?
The story is good! I scored it 5 for every point because it is just simply good!The story and characters are nice, the broken speech of the younger sister is interesting!So is the way the antagonist olots against him.I wonder why you don't have more interest - probably because there's no hook or really cool thing to catch a reader in the title, synopsis or first chapter?Maybe put 2-3 paragraphs of AFTER he has gained power at the start? Then flashback to the start of the story?
Mr Valmon Dain as a scientist, invented a machine which will be able to track voices communication over phones and using the means to report criminal act to the police but now he was In situation whereby the latest intimation no 34 he reported, the leader of the silver Arrow group happens to be her girlfriend's dad. Now watch out for what is going to happen next.
"Wow! I would never be able to do anything like this. Thank you!" Suyin exclaimed, her gratitude evident in the sincerity of her words as she bowed gratefully to the maids.
