Corruption : The Error - Reviews

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I'm only writing this review because it will help Vain in some way (I don't actually know what a review does in WN for a novel lol), but I am reading this in SH and it's one of my favourite novels. I recommend this for everyone that's reading this review, and while I would like to say the reasons for that, I don't really know how to write a proper review when it comes to things like Writing Quality, Story Development, Character Desing, Updating Stability and World Background. But what I can say it's that I would give 5 Stars for each of this categories, and I hope that the people who read/will read this novel have the same wonderful experience that I have when reading it's chapters!Thanks for the novel btw, Vain!

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This needs to get picked. Flaws:-Poor worldbuilding-The cultivation realms have not been explained yet (CH 19)-Story is shallow-Slightly wonky translations, still very understandable though. I’ve read far worse, this is very much tolerable.Merits:-Fun read.-Better than most of the stuff that gets picked nowadays.-Decently conceptualised system.Overally I’d give this a 3/5 it I’m giving it a 5 cuz I want it to get picked.

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the story was ok at first but then mc starts to have negative iq and retardation syndrome around ch 45 and 52 which pretty much ruin the story via author forcing situations that is uncharacteristic of the mc which only leads me to think its beta mc and dummy mc furthermore when mc is in building he doesn't even make smart decisions like why would he now think about his status screen first omg i don't wanna think about more things that's wrong with the mc the more i think the more i realize was stupid things that he did in the story READ THIS IF YOU HAVE NOTHING ELSE *shrugs*

Ya know... That's the first time I've ever heard a name for my gift... I think it suits it! That's what I'll call it from now on... The Power of Death

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before that day