I really like this novel. Let me see I spent the hole night reading this novel in a bit more than 5 hours without a break. I can't seem to wait for the new chapters of this nice novel.
Very nice I like it for a Novice novelist its amazing....................................................................................................................................
Hello, Please leave suggestions on how I can make the story more interesting, Iam still a. new author and I want to make my books more and more lively, I know that haver grammer mistakes but other then that please leave suggestions, Think of it as Constructive Criticism
"Di (sister) you look like angel in this lehenga set" Ruhi aunt Gayatri's daughter said while adoring my outfit. I kissed her cheek she was my younger sister who loves me more than anyone.
"of course master. when you are living. there is a part in your body called the soul. it is the spiritual representation of your body and has a strong life force. That is why the body deteriorate much more but the soul can last for millions of years. the Grand master vulma embedded me in your soul for you are to serve a great purpose in the upcoming war."