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Basically you can skip most of the chapter and you don't miss anything important.The MC is retarded as ****. Gains a scanner of good athletes near 10 meters of him and doesn't abuse it.Has an almighty Wikipedia voice in the head (that is really baby spoon feed basic information like it was a hidden knowledge of the mighty sage) and doesn't ask or test the limits of his answers to plan the most efficient way to use his powers.I already said he is retarded, but why? Well I only read until the chapter 10 but I couldn't stand it anymore. You have a one time buff time for a beginner chest and you want to use it immediately without none to train ? are you stupid?Then, the system tells him numerous times that he can train random people...WHy can't he do it in the spare time he has ? He only trains the fat kids like a part-time job! Use the maximum time of your buff dude !!And then he has a genius (insert meme genius here) idea to say...HEY ! I can train 8 fats kids, if I can train 10.000 kids of high school I can be richhh! Jesus ****...what the **** the author is thinking.Dropped. Don't waste your time.2 Stars because no harem or horny Chinese idiot.
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Hey guys I am a new writer and don't know many things some mistake mightbe there, in due time my writing skills will improve. In a couple more chapters you might notice the improvement in the story and as well as the charector's, so pleas rate the book to further improvement.
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This is a great read! MC doesn't get sent back to the past once, but twice, which makes seeing him adapting to this situation really interesting. I like the world building. Would like to see a faster pace in these types of 'vr novels', would not like a read multiple chapters of grinding. The dialogue could be better written as well. All in all, would recommend! Happy reading!
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The synopsis illustrates very that the story has a good storyline. Although I haven't read the entire book, I bet the plot of the book is fascinating.
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Without a word, the three Genin moved in behind Kakashi, looking at each other and then at their sensei. They were all a little nervous, but this wasn't the first time they had been in a situation where their lives were in danger. All it took were some deep breaths and remembering that things could be much worse to be able to keep calm.
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"I just can't, okay? I'm so sorry but I can't."

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