Confined Love - Reviews

Would've been a great read if: [1] there were pagebreaks to tell time lapse and/or POV switch, [2] the author didn't constantly mess up character names, [3] there weren't plot holes (e.g one character being alive, & another a mafia boss, [4] Fire wasn't written as either pathetically naïve or stupid

"Hello everyone ,let me introduce myself for those who don't know me .My name is Fin and this is Eva my friend .We are assigned to come up with a solution for the city and after giving some serious thoughts ,we have decided on something .Please give us valuable feedback after hearing it."