Cold Emerald - Reviews

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I like it, but the slice-of-life nature + an Overpowered MC doesn’t make for interesting writing. If there were more comedy I could bear with it, but it’s not that funny.

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good plot...............................................................................................................................................................and i hope that you dont drop this novel and take your time to continue writing.....

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Great story, the concept is original so no stereotypes. Character development is well done, writing style and spelling are not confusing.  The concept and adaptability of Andrew to new situations imagined by the author are perfect. Do not roll your eyes! This is a really good story!

The beginning was pretty solid, but man, they really threw some random tragedy at the main character, which felt a bit forced. After that though, the story was moving along nicely, keeping a good flow. But as soon as the MC left the Village for the next town, things started to drag. Plus, the plot armor was so thick. The villains just kept messing with him, and all he did was think, "I'll remember this, I'll get you back someday," without really doing anything about it. Maybe the author wanted to show the MC's growth in excruciating detail, but it just made the story super slow and it's frustrating to see those villains keep coming back for more.

adding a review for fp , so far interesting

"Depends - Are you??"

Naga went back to their manor and talked to Old Samuel about what he learned. The old elf was shocked and told Naga to be careful in front of the shadow emissary. It was decided that only Bill and Old Samuel will interact with the people from the council.

"--Korosensei?!

"No Ahadd!!!! Listen, we obviously consistent in losing war for a decade now. Yes, soldier-wise we are superior, we are proud of their strength but we cannot handle any more loses of these soldiers or else it won't just be the Ferguhlia Kingdom attacking us, those nations on the side eyeing and watching us our nations battle through might not sit still any longer. Consider the people if you can't consider betraying the Empire!" I never once thought that Guar was this mad. I also thought of it,  but those geezers in the ranks will never lay down their proud attitude and would rather die than compromise.