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Honestly quite an entertaining novel, but it's completely ruined by the fact that the TL has absolutely no communication with the reader base and has no idea how to actually upload chapters in order (or even the right chapters in some cases).This is a great example of a fun novel being ruined by a completely oblivious TL (assuming the TL is even a real person).I've scored down the Story development due to the wrong chapters being uploaded all the time and completely ruining the story's continuity.
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The man character is a bit weirdThe synopsis almost made me belive this was a romance novel until I read the whole thingDescriptions need more workOverall its not a bad chapter it just needs more polishing
little thing, its easy to get "lost" in the evidence. Imagine 100 of irrelevant clues and you need to find the one that matters. It would be a nightmare.
"The younger one. I think the name is... Sasha? Anyway, just go! He'd been waiting for a while now! If he complains that he waited too long, the Baron will whip my ass!"
"Pero..." ang nasambit na lang ng dalaga habang nililingon ang dalawang kasama na patuloy pa rin sa bangayan kung sino ang mas matakaw sa dalawa habang patuloy na naglalakad patungong canteen.
