City of Desire - Reviews

I see potential here………………………………………………. I will keep reading so write more

I just noticed that an wan has a new novel. I love monster integration so I hope I’ll like this one too. Excited to start reading.

loved it.

I had wanted to read a good litrpg for long, and this one seemed good.

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I am the author, of course; I will rate my novel five stars, but seriously it is good,

Do read and write a review.

the novel is pretty interesting, looking forward to read the next chapters

Love the novel just finished reading chapter 287 deffo one of favourites right now the world background and characters are amazing aswell as the leveling system and story love the way it’s heading only problem was the writing were author sometimes mixes names or repeats chapters and class names though it hasn’t happened as much in the past 100 chapters still better than a lot of other stories and doesn’t effect the reading can’t wait for next chapter deffo a hidden gem surprised tht u dnt have to pay for chapters aswell considering how good it is anyway it’s a great novel tht u should atleast try to read.

My biggest three issues in the novel can all be solved with some editing, I mean I swear it was over a hundred chapters before suite was spelled as suite instead of suit. He'd go to his suit, shower and change into his suit, before leaving his suit headed to someone else's suit. Besides editing stuff though, I really like the story and binged all 249 chapters. Also, not what I was expecting when I read the synopsis.

Good novel, a little slow but enjoyable