The author is, after reading some similar material, trying their hand at writing a story of their own. It is very interesting what concepts the author likes to borrow.
That being said, I know that it's cool that they have borrowed ideas from the novels they have, are and will be reading and translating such as Eliza, EDCL (experimental... lich), NEET and etc.
I praise the author for starting with the rough rock, that which I previously have mentioned in a comment, and working to make this a gem! I looking forward to working, reading, enjoying, being with the author every step of the away.
It may seem a little bland at first but I believe the author can and is able to twist this previously precedents into their own unique twist and style
Sincerely and yours truly,
Sir. Tentacles Shrubs