CHRONICLES OF THE MAGIC USER'S THE AWAKENING - Reviews

The biggest problem I have with this is that there is nothing making it stand out. If the novel was a person and the flesh and blood was the characters and world, the person would be a rotting corpse. Furthermore, the bones (plot) wouldn't be bones that were refined in anyway. They would be ordinary and just like all the other persons (stories). I really dislike this so I might be a bit harsh.

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From the beginning to the end, you can see it, but you can't touch it. That's the case with this book. MC is stupid, MC is mentally handicapped, he has comprehension problems, there are also willpower and decision-making problems.

In this novel, the MC revels in genocide of people where he grew up, just because the top leader misled the good people. I think the author should be placed under close psychiatric observation. Sometimes disturbed people acts reveal their inner thoughts before tragedy.

A nice xianxia with a different approach.Just hope that we got more frequent updates.You must try it.Only complain is that mc has just grown 1 small level in 200 chapters. He should cultivate faster.

this is good...........................................................................................................................................

The concept is great. But the story flow is so incoherent and random that you have no idea what is happening. Mc mining ores in a cave, devil girl drops onto his front. Mc running away, stuck in ground 10 feet under. It's so abrupt and random, no transition or explanation.Half the story mc is talking in his lalaland and readers have to make guesswork all the time what is happening. Is this the flashback or was it happening to mc now?So, in summary, it's confusing and the author is mostly talking to himself about the key points of the story. It is missing a lot of context and the transitions are not there.

I'll give another review after 50 chaps, but for now... I'm hooked man.The lazy protagonist and the twists of events really left me hanging... man! I can't wait for more chaps. Looking forward to it!!! ???

I picked this by chance to read about it and when i started reading it i realized i really enjoyed this. Though still i am only on chapter 47 I am excited to continue this till the end. This is not something I usually read and so far I recommend it

well...! this story its good but the problem is CHINA number 1, I can see in the future there have many racism and china or mc making enemies with all nation (earth)! well I pray that this will not happen!

Great but translation for the nicknames are a bit weird.. like Azure Dragon 5.. Azure Claw 17... Senior Sister 1.. wouldn’t it be better if it were Fifth Azure Dragon or Seventeenth Azure Claw... or First Senior Sister?

There is a lot of potential with this style of writing and I do not want to see it be ruined. The elements for a good story are there but there needs to be a lot more background building and show not tell. The story is being rushed and there are rough transitions peppered throughout the novel. I recommend taking your time to smooth out the story and make it flow. There are good materials present, but you have to use them well.