Chronicles Of The Deadly Abyss - N - Reviews

Interesting book. Love Andre and the whole family dynamic.

very good characters

(Disclaimer: i only read about 300 something chapters)this novel is meh. It was cool at the beginning, but then it went from a cold mc and his own personal power growth to just army building and nonsense harem most of the time. The power progression of the mc is also absolutely bonkers, he takes forever to make breakthroughs and the requirements to make them are outright ludicrous. what's the point of realms and orders if you can just skip them and kill beyond your order? at first it gave you quite the dopamine rush reading these type of david vs goliath encounters, but then you realize how dumb the power system is. also, never once cared for the whole succubus partner deal, so that was also one of the things that put me off.

The cover 5/5The synopsis 5/5The writing? It was amazingly written and it surprised me that Webnovel has such quality writer. This is a hidden gem and I'm glad to discover it.

say hi to racism if u want to read this novel they have foreign competition it's just like most of other novels in this genre the mc will make a company and blah blah concept is good hope any author who is reading can write this story in an alternative universe and without romance that would be legit good and don't add real world to it

Today I'm tired so I wont leave as detailed a review as I normally do.The main problem with this book is that it is painful to read.It is not emotionally painful to read, and not badly written painful to read.It is 'why the hëll did THIS happen?' painful to read.Like I said, I'm tired, don't wanna explain much, so I'll give just one example.MC is born again in a disgüstingly mütilated body. Fine.Young master is törturing her. Okay.Wants her to get räped. Fine.Lacky comes in, thinks she's too disgüsting. Okay.Young master gets distracted. MC tries to escape.The 'loyal' servant of the MC UNEXPECTEDLY shouts when he sees she's escaping, alerting the young master. He'd been watching leisurely btw. And he's loyal, according to the story. I kid you not.All of this is okay.Then there's the system. I don't like how it works. At all.Why 5 stars?Because it's yuri. And the story can improve as it goes on. I'll probably come back to read it once it has more chapters.

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It's rather heavy on the author's note in the beginning, but it’s intriguing to me because it gives me a better sense of a genre I don’t normally read. My husband loves reading stories like this and tells me about them, but I prefer romance for the most part. It’s good look at something different for a change.You did a great job introducing the characters as relatable and human. It makes their downfall all the more heart-rending. I wasn’t focusing on grammar, but it looks pretty clean.

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A very cool world with a very unique background. The language is solid and easy to read. All in all a good story in my opinion. Keep up the good work.

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have read 527 chapters. its a good novel,ofcourse girls are the issue,like in every few chapters "taoist sound starts to play" .At the start i couldnt read this,like he chases every girl ,if there is mention of any girls then mc will marry them.but as you read you will get used to it and mc improves a bit.now for the good part :world background is solid.MC is op asf.random person pov is good .if you liken world development or clan development novel ,do read it.mc has 26 wife and hes not stopping ,lets see what will be his score