CHRISTMAS KIDS. Gravity Falls - Reviews

Hello all authors. Please stop writing children protagonists into stories clearly designed for adult leads (or at the very least somewhat adult-late teens). Anime and japanese light novels influenced and ruined an entire generation of what could have been amazing writers. At no point does it make sense in this novel, nor in 99% of other CP novels. Ruins the entire reading expericence and decimates any form of immersion.

Author is just forcing MC to go on self made Hardship which he can overcome with a single thought.

So far good enough. A big world filled with many characters. For the first few chapters, the story stretches around for a bit and there was a bit of confusion but, the author managed to plug those plotholes so far. The writing quality needs some improvement but overall interesting plot.

A great start indeed. I was annoyed by the goddess at start and thought the mc has no shame but I was wrong the further I read. I'm liking the goddess character more than the xue rou girl and Also how mc is cold instead acting innocent and naive.

from 000 to 999 the author course to have the dormitory number be 666 is he ok. he must have a reason for choosing such a number as a Christian can't read it recommend this book what's this trash

I love it!!! I wish i could time travel to the future just to read the complete novel without waiting.Keep it up with this one pls author-san!!!

i might be here to complain but not about the novel, I'm here because i hate locked chapter, who wants to spend $600 to read a single novel, when you can go buy a normal book that's larger and 1/20 the price

Although I feel like everyone and their mom has an Emporer called Kong ming. The author has a vivid imagination and and I am expecting more from this novel because writing novels like this need something to set it apart

This is a pretty typical cultivation novel.  Again, there are some tropes I don't really like - uninteresting love interests, backstabbing sect and clan dynamics, and an MC who hasn't really shown a great deal of mental development so far.  So in some ways this makes me wonder where this story is going.There are a couple of things I do like.   I like the cheat the MC has.   So far it's an interesting add towards his physical development but not towards his cultivation abilities.   There's definitely some mystery surrounding this and I'm certainly curious to see how this develops.   The other thing I like is that the chapters are relatively long for what that's worth.I guess overall I'd be interested in following this story if it got chosen, as long as the story doesn't fall into a loop of repetitive plot elements.

I give it 10/10 it has alot of spelling errors, but there is enough context to tell what it should be. but the story is amazing, I wish I was here when it first was written especially after I have read the next novel in the series twice now. so seeing the beginning is rather exciting. definitely worth the read and it's not terribly expensive maybe 3000 coins in total or something. do read if you enjoy the other novels. and if you havet read the other novels read this first to understand the background, or don't qnd come back after you have read it and enjoy all the references you missed.

very good........................   ......

Oh, that took care of that problem