Chosen: Battle against robots - Reviews

                    Very  nice  like it.                      A very very interesting story                         Truly a masterpiece I vote I a 7 out of ten

The book is very good. However as you keep going the plot gets more confusing and stuff. Like there's characters with names from DXD, fate, and other stuff. Its not exactly organized much like that fanfic with a person trying to be a evil lord but failing. I would compare this to the arc where the MC was in Eyes Of Heaven.  Overall its a decent story

Good stuff but no recent updates is sadge

where is the next chapter author, where???

It is a good story but for whatever reason it has stopped getting new postings.                                                                 B                                                                                                        b

It’s just fantastic and you’re doing yourself a disservice if you don’t read it.

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it's not horrible but the author definitely needs to get an editor to go over the chapters. the grammar isn't unreadable but it's still pretty bad.

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          "I'm back," Lucas announced. "Did you see anything wrong with it?" I asked. "Yes I did, there was a loose wire so my guess is that it was not fitted properly," Lucas answered. "You have fixed it right," I inquired. "Yes I have, so what did I miss," Lucas said." Madilyn will you do the honors?" I asked politely. "Sure," she replied. "We are going to Terra," Madilyn said happily. "Motherboard, give us the details about Terra?" I ordered. "Terra also called earth has a wide variety of living organisms ranging in different sizes due to the amount of sunlight, atmosphere, and water it possesses. Its Sun called Sol is a yellow star and it has only one moon and possesses a diameter of thirteen thousand kilometers," the motherboard answered. "That isn't supposed to be all," Madilyn said. "Yes you are right, we weren't told about the gravity, the percent of water and rocks, the composition of the atmosphere and so much more," I concluded not wanting to sound like a know it all.

"Nice." I said as feel satisfied with my skills. I trained in thirty minutes using my spinning compressed mana sphere and alternate it for six hours. Here are the results.

SHP : 1100