Children of Aether - Reviews

Fantastic book

This is really amazing. I read the introductory chapters...and I'm stuck!

This novel is one of the best VRMMORPG novels out there and one of my favourites.The main character Yuan is dense and pure because of his condition and minimum interaction with society. But I guess thats reasonable over an edgy and cringe MC. But Character Development is quite slow compared to the story's overall pacing and I hope it develops.Characters are well designed for each situation and helps keep the story going at a decent flow. (with the occasional face slapping ofc XD)The Background of both the game and real world is well designed, but infomation on the Nine Heavens isn't fully revealed even from where Im at (Im at Chapter 444) and I hope it keeps growing without affecting the overall flow of the story. The Writing is very good with little to no grammatical and spelling errors helping with the consistent immersion. But during some instances the scenery was briefly described which didn't help me fully picture the place in which the situation was going on.The novel is very awesome overall and I would recommend anyone interested in reading Eastern Fantasyor Video Games to give this a try!I would also like to give respect to the author for writing such a novel! Keep up the good work Author!P.S. This is my first ever review if you see any mistakes please point them out and thank you for your time reading up to this point!

Parece interesante, espero que sea tan bueno como parece

Very good. Really like the book so far and hope the quality continues throughout. I would recommend this book for people to read and I hope the author doesnt drop it for a long while.

author, please move this to the fanfic section. you will be forced to move later on anyway, best to do it now. i havent read it yet, im just here to tellbyou this.

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The internal struggle in Ryo's mind is the highlight of this story. From what he went through during his adolescence up to when he was already an ex yakuza was so realistically laid out that I could practically perceive the pain he's going through. It gives us a feeling it can happen to any of us. That guilty struggle to right the wrong of the past but still ending up choosing an inescapable path of deceit really hits the spot. We've got a real marvel of a storyteller here. Great job, author! This one can potentially become a big scifi hit someday, so good luck ??☺

I believe the story is quite good but the world lore should be explained a bit more as that would lay quite a good foundation for the later chapters. Overall, I find the story quite good.

are this dropped???

Eh? Help me? How?

Orion shrugged a cunning smile turning up his lips, "To his cuffs then, or did you not notice them either?" He walked over to the bar with a wide powerful gait. He pulled out a bar stool before sitting down and looking over at Liam who could only stare in shock at the exchange. "Are you not the bartender?"