Chasing the Gridiron Dream Book1 (Knights and Gridiron) - Reviews

Chasing the Gridiron Dream Book1 (Knights and Gridiron)
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I like this novel quite a lot . The writing quality is excellent the story development is quite good as everything is connected, every character has different personalities so they have a hint of realism not your typical 2d although the girls easily fall for him they take time to accept the relationship.Updates are on point and currently we have not yet travelled to another world but we have got previews of what is to come .The only problem which I have is maybe my personal problem , which is mc is too soft hearted and very passive.Like I know you don't need to kill everyone everytime but sometimes you need to get proper revenge because they deserve it ,for example ,the enemies of mc almost killed him,tried to r@pe his lovers and friends many times, did way to many horrible deeds that definately deserve death but mc got soft,and mc many times is repulsed by the fact of torturing of most irredemible villains, also he leaves his lifelong opponents who destroyed his everything just because of women , honestly it's kind of irritating when you don't get proper revenge. He can easily take revenge by using his resources and lovers but he doesn't,I don't know why he is just waiting for them to do something against him. Other than my personal problem everything is amazing just hoping that mc can get a little cold hearted for his enemies. But I am sure you gonna enjoy it cause iIam still reading it .
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The moment soon passed, and the gnome tucked his amulet back under his shirt. The other miners grabbed their stuff, as well as things that used to belong to their cell mates. When everyone was ready, Finn and Jess decided it was time to head back.
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"How naive you are, The Girl, and you call yourself a resident of this great country called Es-- I mean Ouest Hekia?"
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" tak ada bantahan...."
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Yu Long removed his thumb from his mouth.
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Lekas ku menunduk menutupi wajahku dengan kertas yang sedari tadi kupegang
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The body ducked out of the way while the others pushed Oliver away.
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Name: Dheksyl Romeo
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When Qiao Na Feng opened the door, he saw a large room. The walls were painted white and matched quite well with the dark wood floors. Big, gray tables were lined along  both side of the walls. There were 6 tables on both walls, making it 12 tables in all. One big, brown desk was in front of a white board in the front of the room.
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He was sitting on his bed and slightly trying to organize his thoughts.
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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?

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