I really like this new story. It has the cultivation end of things which I like but it also has a mix of a mage feeling to it. It has a good mysterious plot happening which I really like and it has the face slapping without being as vicious as a lot of cultivation novels are at this point. Not that I don't like all the good fight scenes in my novels but it is a nice change from the status quo. I also really like the school idea in this book. It is different from the sects that you usually read about.
I have long been looking for a book that would go in this direction, so I excited to continue reading it, as the first few chapters so far have trapped me in them, making me want to continue reading. Good job author!
It would be a great story if there are more chapters. Until now it is a goog and unique beginning and setting and has the potential to be interesting for a long time.
Hi author. Your story plot is amazing and intriguing. The readers who like to read system novels, this is totally for them . I could not find any grammar mistakes. As for the world background it is also nice. As its just the start all the best and keep writing
"Bakit naman ho kita lolokohin? Close ho ba tayo?" Psh. Mukha ba akong FC? Hindi ko nga alam pangalan niya tapos lolokohin ko pa? Malay ko ba kung anong klaseng tao siya. Baka mamaya mamamatay tao pala siya, edi patay ako niyan.
