Mc is said to be a delinquent but what I found out about him is that , he is just another pushover and the interaction between characters is too subtle.Chapters are filled with slashes here and there. My head starts to hurt while reading this .
I have loved it, I hope it is chosenfor translation................................................................Exp.exp.xp.xp.xp........................................
this story is so goood! the author surely did a lot of work on this. im so hooked up with this story! i never thoight that i will like this kind of book. good job author!
can someone give me the name of the raw? And interesting concept..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,...,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,
Novel is so cliche and just really painful to read, not worth my precious coins. Everyone seems really stupid and ugg, the MC’s train of thought is just so baffling. and not only that, it turned premium so soon lol
A solid, generic cultuvation fantasy with an unlikely protagonist. The isekai genre has a problem in general with pre-transmigration character building. I have a hard time believing a mentally unstable kid who was abused until he committed a murder suicide is capable of this.It could be argued that his talents were suppressed by circumstance (aka abusive father), and a fresh chance at life in a magical world unlocked his potential. However, all we get are strange dreams with no indication that he has any untapped potential.By spending so little time exploring Darius King, Liam's new life feels like a fever dream. With that said, the story from this point is as good as most on this platform.Maybe I'm just tired of the isekai, transmigration formula. Take a loser, outcast, pitiful existence and allow them to be reborn in glory with a system or talent they didn't have before and bake it in the oven. In reality, a pathetic kid in one life will just be a magical pathetic kid in the next.Writing trauma, and its effects, is difficult but to ignore the impact of murdering your father and then yourself weakens your story . Truckkun exists as a plot device for a reason (clean, unexpected break). If you want a spicier pre-transmigration plot, spend some more time exploring it.
"Its a shame i was bound to be a guardian of this place.. i could have done something for my master. If your words are true then maybe thats why you are here but i doubt they can easily kill my master"
Walking, he finally reached the river, sat down on a rock and started fishing, "Bangus, Bangus, come to me, get hooked and serve our stomach~" While singing some trash song, he finally caught 3 Bangus and went to his Grandpa's house.
It’s truly remarkable to see such a high level of skill and creativity from the very start. Your writing carries a unique charm, effortlessly drawing readers into the world you’ve crafted. The depth, the pacing, and the sheer brilliance of your storytelling are nothing short of exceptional. If this is just the beginning, I can only imagine the masterpieces you will create in the future. Keep going—your talent is undeniable, and greatness surely awaits you!☹️???
