Celestial Embers: The Chronicle of Xu Yun - Reviews

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This story is really an eye-catching one because it not only talks about reborn but also the arrogance of the character is really amazing. Not knowing that he was reborn, others just keep on putting themselves into danger which is very normal but the characyer is really amazing to be able to defend himself greatly.

Story has lot of potential , it's one of a kind novel,I'm looking forward for the upcoming chapter.ALL THE BEST?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Come on people its been more than 5 weeks , kindly vote for this awesome story. The idea is new and fresh expecting to experience multiple stories which froge the MC to have a Strong Unyielding character and a powerful knowledge of cultivation just like the MC of Emperors Domination so please vote.

there are some wrong grammar and typos, but its good the story but dont rush it i feel like the events are too fast, it has an interesting story, keep up

"Okay you can go now."

"We have a deal. You can keep this for now. I'll be taking it once we are done. Sounds good?"

"L-Lilly… ?"

While most of the children have already arrived I can see a little blonde haired kid with spikey hair

-Yes my lord.

The skies began to darken and it looked as if the black clouds that were in the sky started to float downwards. The streets grew dark, even with the streetlights arranged at the side of the road. It looked like a black fog was passing. The light from the lamps couldn't even brighten up more than a few inches around the lamps.

This story is nearly below average in everything. The grammar is abysmal, the characters aren't fleshed out ( but theirs only 25 as im currently writing this review, so it may change), and everything else seems *******ish. And listen guy, it's okay if you want to include dark themes like r@pe into your story but it has to make sense. Why after only 30 minutes of an apocalypse is rape already happening? Literally everyone would  be trying to procure a safe haven and some supplies, nobody would even have the feckin time.The character interactions are cringy and the MC is already acting like an edge boi. Slow your roll man, take a deep breath and replan your story.