The pacing in these chapters is absolutely masterful and I want to talk about why it works so well.
Chapter 7 starts with Chu Yiran already three days into her anxiety spiral. She's spent half an hour studying her face in the mirror, considering whether to wear a mask to a meeting with thousands of people. The author doesn't waste time building up to the tension—the tension is already there, already at boiling point, and we're dropped right into it. This is efficient storytelling. Every paragraph is doing work.
Then the actual briefing scene—the way it's structured is brilliant. We get the setup (the floor plan, the task swap, the morning meeting), then the day of (waking up at 6:30, the outfit, the mirror check), then the meeting itself where everything seems to be going according to plan. Chu Yiran is in the backstage, listening through speakers, feeling safe. And then—the walkie-talkie crackles. The kettle is empty. She has to go out there. The entire chapter's tension, which had been building for pages, compresses into those twenty seconds where she's walking down the aisle with a hot water kettle.
And then Chapter 8 starts almost immediately after, picking up at the exact moment of contact. No breather. Just: her hand reaches over, she freezes, he looks, she walks away. The transition is so seamless you don't even realize you've turned a page.
What's clever is how the author uses the aftermath to vary the pace. After that heart-stopping encounter, we get the mundane office routine—the pen, Lin Yuan, the lost-and-found, the cafeteria lunch. It's like the story is letting you exhale, but it's also keeping you on edge because Chu Yiran can't exhale. She's "in a state of high alert all morning." The pacing mirrors her psychological state: bursts of extreme tension followed by forced normalcy that never actually feels normal.
And that ending—she sends the text, waits five minutes, gets a reply, tries another line, gets caught. The chapter ends on "Chu Yiran froze." Not a cliffhanger per se, but it's the kind of freeze that makes you immediately want to turn the page.