Overall, up to 8 chapters as of now ok no harem since its a dad daughter novel and has a romance tag so queen = fmc ?? I hope so lol overall its good but is his dad coming back with the milk tho? so far I likey with this I further await next chapters..... Bye.
The most annoying mc I have ever seen. It was all fine at beginning when you come across his heaven defying talent but I think the choices he makes are really bad even after he had a century worth of life experience. This annoys me to no end.
Dont be in a hurry to rush your chapters bro... Enjoy writing your story as ive enjoyed reading it also... Keep up the good work and have a nice day....................
Well, I honestly think that this story has a lot of potential. It kinda reminds me of beggining after the end with a bit of differences here and there. Anyways, Goodluck author, keep it up!
Semua karakternya bagus.... Awal ceritanya menarik... Aq sk petualangan.. Agak kolosal.... Tetapi kenapa ceritanya kok mundur secara mendadak dan langsung berubah era.... Sehrsnya kl mo mundur jgn terlalu cepat.. Aq mpek bingung kirain cerita baru.... Semangat ya
Karl blinked a few times at her words. It was true he did ask a reward from her, since the one who requested was her. Although, he did not expect that she would go with what he had in mind before.
