CAGED BY LUCIFER - Reviews

kinda felt bad abt Xu Yang, a nice guy outstanding and good looking and all. But he was beaten by a freaking cheat system user who was originally a loser with good looks.

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I really don't like novels were the MC breaks the entire world's system in the first chapters. Why even spent time establishing a world, not that copying pokemon is great, but still, why spent the time only to shatter everything to make the MC look OP?There are no twists, no suspense and no immersion. This is literally a stomp festival in written form.Might be fun as a fanfiction for pokemon, but as a stand alone work? Just terrible.

Thank you everybody for your support because we've currently reached a total of 23K viewers and it's continually increasing. I'll admit, when I first started posting this. I wasn't sure I could deal with it because I don't have much free time even during the holidays so if you see some chapters which I haven't changed certain words, that's because I don't have the time to do so. Nevertheless, though this novel is not for the faint of heart. It's still quite good right. ?

Very slow updates but the novel is very good.I advise swordprofane to increase the release schedule if he wants the novel to get more readers.

We got out of the car and approached the police tape. The police officer in front were mythical's. Two beast men. One Avian and one Dog person. As soon we approached they glanced at our badges and lifted the tape for us to enter.

"But I'm older than her." The tiny boy with his soft pink sweater said indifferently. The lady was shock to what Cole said as she stared the kid from head to toe.

I closed my eyes tightly and waited for my fall. But, after a while, I didn't feel any pain. I slowly opened my eyes.

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The material was smooth and flexible. Light but tense, and no matter how much strength I put into pulling it, where little or much, it would bend with just the right strength. A perfect bow.

「Fue? I don't though...hyan!?」

Hearing Sasuke's words, all the students lined up behind him, aside from Tieta, showed expressions of shock. They all gave extremely strange looks at Sasuke, and quite a few suspected that they had heard him wrong. In their opinion, if you needed to hand over your monster cores, then just hand them over. Why would you bother caring about how large the table being used was? Wasn't this simply asking for trouble?