But he is my brother - Reviews

I don't usually write reviews but here goes.I actually think they the premise is great and allows for a very expansive story. The plot and direction is quite interesting to say the least. The first hundred or so chapters is easy to read through and leaves you wanting for more. That said, I have a lot of gripes with this story.The plot develops in a predictable and formulaic manner. It's almost always a strict rise and fall, something good then bad then good etc. I know it happens quite lot with cultivation novels but much more so on this one. The story is also frustrating all the way. It's all just set-up and nothing is ever resolved. The story progresses and characters get replaced but the status quo never changes. The pacing also feels atrocious because the author explains everything. Nothing is left unsaid. There are neither emotions nor subtleties left for the reader to decipher. Of course this is the case with a lot of other novels but the sheer number of relevant characters in this novel makes it more pronounced and all the more agonizing. The story is quite literally all explanation and exposition.With so much words spared for exploring the main character's psyche, you'd think he'd be a well developed character. He's not. He's still by and large pretty much the same as a generic MC. He's definitely a carbon copy of every other MC from the author's other novels.A part of me really wants to see where this goes because I actually really like the world building, and the interesting and complex storyline. But it's honestly a chore to slog through hundreds of chapters of a practically stagnant story.

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♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★This Saiyan ...*cough*... this Lord wanted to claim first but was late, so imma gonna read first before  "reviewing" again. ♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★

this is trash. I haven't even read the book yet but I already know it's trash.  Please don't read it as its only be a waste of time @everyone. ??

The story truly reads like an anime/show. I love the MC and the growth of the characters so far. Although I do hope that Light gets a little more love here soon. The story isn’t exactly original but the use of these “titles” are unique in a way and I think that the author is getting better at painting nice vivid mental images when needed. Side character perspective are nice also. I’ve read a little under 140 chapters and I’m hooked. Only things I would like to critique but not really is for the auther not to over look certain detail like items, powers, or emotions when going forwards in the story. We remember everything that happens or doesn’t happen. Keep up the good work. Also please throw Light a bone lol

Damage dealt: A

Everyone was stunned. They saw a grand piano from the boy and a golden microphone on the girl. There were a lot of 'Ooohs' and 'Wows' from the crowd. Even Kariza was frozen and wide-eyed.

Fulfilling ambitions of ruler's alike,

Wow. He didn't even bother telling me his name, as if I'm interested with him. I internally rolled my eyes.

Of course such a thing doesn't happen, her temperature is very normal

Kai-La then redirected the cells in Danzos brain to start to grow a new arm. It was a slow process but it was visible to the eyes.

"It's fine already, I managed to do it somehow. Kurihara-san wasn't useful at all."