Its alright for your first attempt. Keep it up for I liked it. Just don't drop it.Be stable. I think you lack the ability to explain an event pretty clearly and in a stable way. But I think you can improve it after some period. I think that you don't make grammatical mistakes and your writing is alright.
Mas infelizmente meu grito atraiu atenções inesperadas alguns dinossauros eles são difíceis de matar e muito fortes então eu corro, mas um dinossauro me encurrala eu penso comigo mesmo.
After finish eating, my sister left first. She was the Student council president in our school. I checked my things to prepare to leave, for a moment I was still hesitating if I can really adapt to a school where there are many people around.
"At least eat and drink you medicine. I'll just go to the mistress' office to get you an excuse letter" I nodded and went back to bed. It feels like I'm having a flu right now. I cannot fathom why though. I feel okay yesterday so I don't understand why I'm feeling bad today. I did not do much yesterday except for our grocery shopping. Plus that vague dream. Ghad! This is even worse than a hang over! This is the woest headache ever!
