bro what the heck. the translation is clearly MTL. not even edit before uploading the chapter. the story is boring too. sigh, wasting my time reading this novel...
Hey, nice system story. I have also tried novel making something ( albeit first time), hope you'll like that. I appreciate the good work and creative of author.?
The pacing is good, your characters are great especially Alexander, I love their design and development, the background is good and so are your descriptions and plot. Love the twists, overall a good story. Keep up the good work
Good novel, good character design, but still could be better. I prefer your other work, Soul Eye. Was becouse of SE that I look for other work of you. And I think that you could finish SE first.
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"Min, I want to join the team whether they are weak or strong. Doesn't matter to me. Even if the rumors are right and the players quit, they were present during the display event last week."
-Ding. Responding to the host is not dreaming or having hallucinations the hosts along with their old land were destroyed more in the last second the system saved their life the host should be grateful
One of my most vivid memories is of coming back west from prep school and later from college at Christmas time. Those who went farther than Chicago would gather in the old dim Union Station at six o'clock of a December evening with a few Chicago friends already caught up into their own holiday gayeties to bid them a hasty goodbye. I remember the fur coats of the girls returning from Miss This or That's and the chatter of frozen breath and the hands waving overhead as we caught sight of old acquaintances and the matchings of invitations:
