Bright Sword: Iron Will - Reviews

This novel started quite interesting, but then just became a mess. Everything is handed to the MC, he has a cheat that makes him have perfect cultivation potential, he has a cheat that makes him master any martial art. At least in other Wuxia the MC trains like crazy, but this guy just has sex with anything with legs. I understand that this novel has R18 in the tags, but there are many with that say tag that have a well told story to go along with the Smut. This is not one of them.

The story is really unique and attention grabbing. It started of pretty good and from then it just spiraled down hill. The author started by switching up the MC persona to some Isekai BSed that was really throwing me off considering our MC is a harden soldier was in charge of annihilating planets ? and solar systems. It just didn’t fit...the image. Overkill of information that was really unnecessary to the story. EVERY female in this story is just a copy and paste like they are either meek or a loud mouth that just add on to the fillers. Story had a great potential and the author simply failed in the delivery. If you can stomach the typical tropes , isekai , female lead you’ll soon forget the name of in need of saving then by all means go for it!

Jimin thought for a minute, before nodding.

"Grace come here i'm sorry i didn't mean to upset you"

Josh: of course

Grey...

"karena ayah adalah lading keberkahan, lading rezeki dan tempat nya rida dan restu dari tuhan.."

Alaric " Stop! call me Alaric!"

I know it is kind of humiliating what we girls go through for the first time, and it's not like the olden days where the truth about lifestyle has been hidden and we were not being told. This modern lifestyle has brought  sensitivity in our everyday lives and now we have to face each and everything that comes our way even if it's disturbing

'A giant purple ... starfish?' Said starfish passed me on the right. I felt a slight jostle on my left, a small patch of warmth that grew into a strong grip. I turned to face... Superman?'

"Yes"

Might be good for others if just looking for the lewd stuff & seemed somewhat like could be an ok story, but I found too much repetitiveness in the writing that annoyed me during the first 8 chapters. Plus the character background build of the supposed high intelligence of the MC to not see basic everyday things during the large time skip. Just make the story seem dull.