Bound to the alpha’s will - Reviews

From title, we know this novel is....From synopsis, we know this novel is.....After reading this novel raw, we know this novel is...Spare me great lord!!!

Why does everything have to be so huge? It makes absolutely no sense. The golden horned beast is supposedly 400km tall, doesn't that just seem ridiculously needless? 400m would be enough and is a much more relatable height. I can't fucking imagine 400km. I can't imagine being next to something 400km tall. Hell, it's actually impossible to see the entire 400km fucking thing at once. Fucking imagine you're standing in space as a 1.8m tall human(Luo Feng), talking or looking at a being that's 400 km tall. It just makes no fucking sense. That's a fucking sixth of Pluto's diameter. It's basically a very small (dwarf) planet. Now imagine you're this small human standing on this planet. You're pretty much invisible, can't be spotted. So how would a fucking 400km tall beast ever put anybody into its eyes? Then there's the fact that the author can't keep his world building straight. First, it's said that space rings can't contain living things. Sure, I'll go for that. But then Luo Feng puts the mother nest inside his internal world, despite not being sector lord in his main body yet and no-one fucking questions it. According to the story, he can't put it in his space ring, so Dylan would know he didn't do that. But hey, my dude Dylan also "knows" he doesn't have an internal world. SO HOW THE FUCK DOES HE STORE THAT SHIT WITH NO-ONE QUESTIONING IT? And why the **** do we spend so much time on upgrading the golden-horned beast when in the 670 chapters I've read so far it's barely been used at ALL. It's only appeared for a few chapters and I'm pretty sure that was 300+ chapters ago. No need for all this filler. Also, for a supposed sci-fi space story, the world building is very surface level. I'll give a few examples. 1. Apparently, the human universe is using the length of earth's days as the most common measurement. Why? 2. The constant references within the story like "Gold are as strong and piercing as the sun" make even less sense. The sun? Earth is a fucking irrelevant planet within the universe, why would this be a common saying? There are many other cases like this too. 3. There are so many Chinese names despite the author's intention to portray the universe as a multicultural thing. 4. Apparently, China's mental training is fucking amazing hey-ho and barely anyone else does mental training unless they're a high level undying. Wtf my dudes??? With the universe portrayed as this GIANT thing with trillions of humans in a single galaxy of which there are trillions more. Why wouldn't mental training be more developed and common? Isn't it unlikely that an aboriginal irrelevant planet would have some of the most advanced stuff in this regard? Really doesn't make sense in the context of the story. Oh yeah and a final tip for you translator. Write 120 million instead of 1.2 hundred million. Oh, and when you actually do it that way, write 910 million instead of 910 hundred million. Oh, whoever's editing this might wanna step up. Like there are some serious issues in pretty much every single chapter with wrong tenses, words, misspellings etc. Like names are actually sometimes spelled 3-4 different ways in 1 chapter alone.

this story, but I have no idea why it stopped at 114th chapter . Did the author drop it? will this continue to update? I sincerely hope this novel gets more chapters while maintaining its quality thus far

I love reading your book! However, I couldn't quite understand the description of the characters, the background, and there were a few grammar problems as well. I suggest some proofreading and your book will be better! I'll be adding this book to my collection to see if you do better!

Raw plz?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

I have not read anything, but ayy my fav linux as cover. I will give you about 4 stars just to get the ball rolling. As for writing another thing. I love the yellow thing on the logo. Kali linux is "cyber security OS" which is used to "prevent" the attacks and used for "ethical" hacking.

I really enjoy reading this novel, even thought there's only 30+ chapters so far. Actually, I see that in reviews and comments at the beginning a lot of ppl complain about the story being 'unscientific'. But let's remember that this novel is in fantasy genre section for a reason. The author tries to be logical and for a layman the logic is alright to read. The modern world in this novel isn't even the focal point so far and when it becomes so... like I said, it's 'fantasy' for a reason...That aside, the MC's development is very fast - from a sick modern man on a verge of dying to an almost immortal handsome being in these 30 chapters. Other stories take at least few hundred if not thousand chapters for it. However, this is actually needed because MC creates worlds, where time flows thousands times faster than in RL, so if he wants to stay there and play 'God', he has to have a longer lifespan. His other abilities also develop quickly, but aside from being smarter and one other thing (don't want to spoil too much), he isn't all that powerful.Other characters are not described much and don't feature a lot in the story. With the MC becoming a god basically, that's to be expected.What I like the most is world building. I don't really care for laws, time and space - I am not a scientist and don't have interest in that area, so descriptions about it are just skipped. What I like is seeing how, after the creation of the new world, the MC creates life, humans, etc. I believe that later it will be even more interesting as there's basically no limit to world creation. Well, anyway, if you are someone who likes fantasy genre and doesn't mind reading a few not too scientific chapters in the beginning, then this novel you may really come to like. The translation is quite good and the story only gets better (so far) from the beginning.

Wow 6 months idle........,.....,......................

interesting IAM going to add this to my library

Echidna's eyelashes trembled in excitement for his reply, as her fingers holding her chest anxiously fidgeted about. Her lips tried several times to speak, but, hesitating moistened them with her tongue.

Tika:"Yeah!!"

" Sia, what's wrong with you? We are your friends. You can share everything with us. What you tried to do was unbelievable and shocking one. Don't you dare try again." Kate said crying and hugged her.