For me everything is PERFECT!It keeps me thrilled,makes me laugh, sad/cry, happy, etc.Almost all emotions I've experienced through this story.My favorite parts is when Fin and Ain is hangs out/about Fin and Ain, and the parts when it makes me laugh, OH, ESPECIALLY when Ain sacrificed for her people "From the start when Athena Family attacks the Solan Fam until the End when The Godfather, become materialized." PS. It was the most part I cried UWAHHH, I also matched it with the song (Unstoppable). <3I think updating the chapters is too long for me ?, please post the new chapters, much early. <3 But no worries, I know how hard you make the story, I understand, its just me being impatient because its AWESOME.