Boruto & Naruto {Comics + Fanart} English - Reviews

Shameless author here!It's a new style of writing for me, but I quite enjoy writing this kind of novel.Please give it a try, I think you'll enjoy it!

This has potential to be a interesting base building novel, something which we could always have more of on this site. Plus, even if this turns into dumpster fire so violent that even the heavens shake, it wont take any trial read spot. So this 5 star review is my hope for a good base building novel!

I love the different aspects of it and the game aspect is really interesting and I love this novel because it leaves me wanting for more. Love this and great work author

This is exhausting to read.No matter how talented the protagonist is, he'll still be mocked for the the down-right worst reasons (you could possibly think of). All of this for what? So that the author can showcase the protagonist's strength, and face slap some superficial villains along the way. The cultivation system itself is so bare-bones it's clearly the author is expecting you - the reader - to have read the novel this book is based off.If all of this wasn't enough - there's the 'adorable' little sister. What is she used for? To create problems of course.

As of now, the story is well written from a grammatical point of view. But we have 30 chapters in which we see an exponential development of harem and not the business empire. And here I have a question, his women can leave their previous husbands because they are not satisfied, then with the increasing numbers in the harem, how many women will remain at the end? Because if the protagonist doesn't have control over time itself, it is impossible to physically satisfy all his women with the rate of expansion of one new woman every 3 chapter. Besides, the title of this work is "Merchant Emperor

She halt. The doors opened and revealed a man. A nice man in a nice suit.

Hearing this the elder looked at Judal as if he had just seen the most retarded person ever.

Hayato rolls up the map and turns to see the owner of the voice, he smiles and says " Just a little earlier, Vice-Guild Master "

Burning Heart.

When Song Ji had gotten home that night, she heard sounds coming from the bedroom. She had heard these sounds before and had ignored them, hoping it wasn't real. Today though she decided to confront her best friend and fiance.

"queen papi mau bicara sama kamu jadi papi langsung to the point aja deh yah, sebenarnya papi ke sini itu niat nya untuk jemput kamu untuk kembali ke Indonesia"ucap papi gua yang langsung ke inti pembicaraan.

I keep jumping up as I hasten my speed and before long I manage to pierce the clouds and went up.