Borrowed Fate - Reviews

Good work.. Congratulations

???I am halfway through the novel and I must say, this book is a gem. the book is so well written, it has the potential to make it big. Five stars because it deserves it. Keep going Author.??

This is a really great book with the theme of magic and isekai which I appreciate so very much. I like how the MC makes so many reliable friends and I also like how he has the drive to become stronger by all means possible

A good opening with it's currently 24 chapters, the characters have a clear motivation and the story setup is interesting. There is some room for improvement in the writing such as grammar and sentence structures and in the more descriptive parts. Sometimes we get the explanation after it already happened which makes the story a bit choppy. Overall right now there's alot of room for improvement which at times take away from the story at certain points but also means that this already interesting story can get even better. Looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!

This novel had serious gender issue. ... ... ... .... .... ..... .... .... ..... ..... .... ..... ..... .......................

Read the first chapter and I’m already hooked with the rest. So far, there are three main characters in your story, which makes it stand out already amongst others. I love the specific descriptions for each character, such as their heights. I feel like it adds context to how they deal with the things that surround them.

i think i’m starting to like this story?

started off a little slow, but picked up pace pretty quickly. it's like a mix of eastern mythology and cultivation more so than other novels. overall pretty good

I swear it’s like every authour on here has some sort of pact where they need to make their mc a spinless coward when it come towards dealing with women I honestly dont get it. The story isn’t that bad well at least the starting chapter the whole tournement arc was meh. When you read something that says monster girl harem in the title and have an mc that proudly proclaim that he’s gonna make one in just the first couple sentences you have certain expectations and those have truly not been met. Idk maybe it gets better after chapter 40 (doubtful)

Suddenly jumping from the roof of the tavern, a man wearing the garb of a hidden guard appeared before the little girl and Niklas. Landing in front of the child while facing the man that had been helping her, the mysterious person made no further actions as he faced off with the bulkier man.

MANILA | *** CHURCH

Then they step back, opening a path towards the set of stairs.