It’s an interesting plot and the beginning has a really good start. I quite like the whole idea of the MC being a soldier. So far, it’s amazing and I can’t wait to see how it works out.
Overall its a decent story with nice background and characters sadly i find the story development lacking but its not all that bad, however the worst part about this novel is writing or rather the grammar part... I don't think i need speak more about how horrible the grammar is.
It's a great story and the world building is amazing.My problem is:1.There is so much things happening at the same time. Seems Like the mc will never get good rest... he is always in danger.. It feels a bit stressful even for the reader. 2.Suddendly the mc is jumped from the 1st to 9th stage and the only struggle is THe breakthrough in major realms.. and that's ok but you ShoUld'Ve focused more at the progress between minor stages. Review made at chapter 240
seriously this is way better than the last and there are a lot of new babes especially his hot and sexy momma. I was thinking of not reading this when you said there'll be a reboot but thank goodness I read it.
This is a story with a similar feel to "History's strongest senior brother" or " History's number 1 founder" or library of heaven's path". But it is just not pick so sad ?
Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars.I would love any feedback you guys can give. This is my third original novel, with the first one still ongoing. Feel free to also treat this as a Q/A session.
