Bloodbound: The Fledgling’s Fate - Reviews

I have read books but believe when I say this particular one has a unique taste to it. The plot development is creative and intriguing. I love this so much, great job author!

Unfortunately, this story is nothing like Long Live Summons. It is about a news editor who became a Void Traveler, traveled in the various worlds and absorbed the memories of other void travelers (the author tells the readers these in the first two chapters, so not a spoiler). Then he is summoned by a girl in a magic school, and the story starts from there as he solves her issues. I found the writing quite bland as the fantasy setting needs one to suspend disbelief, yet the author just tells things instead of showing how the events actually happen. It is readable, but nothing really stands out compared to other fantasy/ summoning novels.

This Ian just my kind of story, I’ve yet to really disagree with the mc, he is ruthless and manipulative, it feels nice for a change, he feels like he knows it all and is smart. The story progress at a slow-moderate speed, but the attention to detail in some chapters really sell the story, you should keep writing

He growled as he clapped his hands and a few heavily built maids came running in with a sedan that he climbed on using one of their backs as a stair. "The walls have ears, let us talk inside."

  KI: 600                       KI: 450            

Hard Shell (Rare)(Level 1)

"Engage."

I did not really get many feedback on Day Dreaming yet although my friend said it is getting good.

What he saw was three slimes taking form. He understood immediately that they were his enemies in the trial. An ancient voice sounded in his ears instantly saying "You have to defeat the slimes as your trial. As you are not a cultivator till now that is why this trial is easy but do not underestimate them."

"We can leave .. do not kill us .. please .. my sister and I can do anything .. even if you want .. we are still pure .. swiff swiff" (Christina) was even more desperate.

I'll be very honest here. The concept in itself is good. The world building is good. The novel needs more updates and the rest will gradually become better.

Chapter 5 was aboslute peak. I've never expected for me to get so invested in such a short novel. The only gripe I have about this novel is the lack of new chapters.