BLOODBOUND HEART - Reviews

Yi Yun will always have a place in my heart. One of the most memorable characters I've seen. Reading his adventures always brings a smile to my face.Thank you CKTalon and Cocooned Cow for bringing us this great novel!

Brah man has literal bots voting for this novel like I'm the second person to review how can literally there literally be 190 stones voted and I'm the second reviewer and the first reviewer pointed out the same thing all I can say is it doesn't add up and if they are ganna put bots to vote why don't they make the bots go all the way and review also this novel was just published 3 days ago and looky here its already popular its pretty suspicious just saying

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I don’t think my writing is good and it might be bad but atleast I wrote it instead of being a pussy and listening to those retards ??????????♾♾??????

He walked out to the front of the house, seeing a couple of the townsfolk walking around, some talking and a few just minding their own business. He grabbed a bucket of water and carefully poured a little water into the crops. He like the garden they had, it was fun to tend to them. But it gets tiring so quickly. He huffed, puffing his cheeks as he sat down onto the stairs of the front porch. Laying his head against his cheeks as he pouted, waiting for his parents to arrive.

Today was the day before high school returned. It was my real last free day and I wanted to spend it outside instead of staying cooped up inside the house.

"Eeeh, is that so? I'll put it in a bit so face your ass to me."

"Ye-yes father!"

It was a very touching moment for the sisters. They hugged for a few minutes. You can feel the genuine love and care that they have for each other. Tonie then urged her sister to sleep already, it is getting late and she still has classes tomorrow early. Claude agreed and they bid each other good night. Tonie went to bed early with a renewed determination to reach her goals and help her family. She needs to be well rested for her battle for tomorrow. What she doesn't know is she will have a chance encounter tomorrow that will change her life forever.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

interesting story plot, good job to the author

Okay so first off this is a combination story, so if you really want to understand everything going on you should also read the Futurani System that they made. Secondly it has very few mistakes (Like maybe one or two every 10 chapters) and it is really interesting doing a proper balance between **** and storytelling. The only thing I can possibly suggest is having two endings one for each story part (where both win and lose) That way people can still enjoy their choice of favorite.