Bloodborne Briefs - Reviews

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So far, the novel is very similar to Ascent in Hollywood and the Hollywood Hunter. I like, I wonder what will happen next with the main character. A big minus the harem, I do not like this genre.

A great story that I have read tons of MTL. Really intriguing and exciting. I just hope that it doesn't have too much of it cut out or censored!Worth the read!

Currently my best.... The translation is quite good... Ah like the storyline...  MC is not always dumb and stupid...  The characters are well made...  No random killing off of characters!

Everything that could be better with the story in my opinion I'm only in Chapter 13.First, you should download Grammarly if you don't already have it because there are spelling mistakes, "or" you could also use virtualwritingtutor.com.Second, the dialogue is weird. You would try rephrasing some sentences because it doesn't sound natural. This would be better for readers to get immersed in the reading.Third, you could try explaining more things because I kinda got confused about how he knew all this stuff.Fourth, you kinda add some unnecessary words in the sentence this makes it feel unnatural. Fifth, some of the dialogue is kind of cringe this is my opinion Idk if any others think this.Overall I'm liking the story so far.

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Writing Quality-Some grammar mistakes and mess ups on tenses happen every chapter, but it's not terrible. Story Development- Generally, the story is fine, but there's a lot of BS. "Destiny" is a major theme of this book so the MC is constantly being harassed and manipulated by the gods or powerful "secret" organizations to do what they want whether he knows he's being influenced or not. It's pretty annoying to read about a character like this who can only continue to exist because of plot armor. I wish the author would just not have destiny and manipulation as a primary theme.  Character Design- Quite a few characters are generic. Not much I can say about that. Updating Stability- Pretty obvious here.  The author hardly misses a day, but chapter length can vary pretty widely.  World Background- I like it and it's enjoyable. Just the divine stuff needs to take a back seat. I want him to be his own entity yet every "mission" he's sent on is generally him trying to find out who is manipulating his "destiny" this time around.

The concept the plot of the novel is great at least I liked it, just has some grammatical errors which will soon be fixed as the edited ones are underway. It's about a child named Lex builled the whole life and gets thrown off a cliff acquire the eye system. Although maybe op for for the current is actually not so op according to author as the universe and rest hasn't been explored, I advise you guys to read it, it's a bit more fresh than typical novels.

author here doing what all author do, read the book please.

I really like it. The author writes really good, and it is nice to see a world where all sexual preferences are treated equally. It is a refreshing change from real life. Thank you author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️