I started reading not too long ago only at chapter 7. the only thing so far I can judge is your grammar. everything else seems fine and is building up. I also know the first volume is a prologue sort of thing however the grammar just gives me headaches to understand what you're trying to write. I hope the author can fix this problem or at the least edit it a bit more and improve as the story goes on
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So far from what I have read the novel seems fairly interesting but some of the side characters and small villain like characters seem to be complete idiots or completely forgettable
MC is pretty cool and there is some pretty decent world building. The game seems decent bad is fleshed out however the ml and the other side characters are already unbearably irritating.Would like to carry on with it but I just can't bring myself to read more
story is great and interisting but i hope you will get a Editor to make this more easy for the eyes.. ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾
The manga for a beginner is a hard thing so I appreciate how you wrote it for your first time the only issues were the writing quality and maybe you could be more detailed but it’s my personal opinion of course but actually I enjoyed reading it so thanks for sacrificing your time for this, I wish you good luck in future!
While Broly and Xerxes travelled towards Planet Bergo, Xerxes decided that it was time to act. He concentrated all of his old Ki he had in his new body, and used it to change his body. It not only aged him a little, but also changed his muscular structure.
