The grammar is great and the story is nicely paced. So far the MC has had a little bit of character development which is good considering his power level. The bonds he's forming are shaping up quite nicelyIts a hidden gem for sure.hopefully the author doesn't drop it. It would be a shame.Good job author
Losing her hair had been more cathartic than she'd expected. She hadn't thought much of it beyond wanting to change her look so she wouldn't be easily recognized. But now that she's chopped most of it all off, she felt like some of the weight on her shoulders had been lifted a bit.
{you've almost reached the limit of talent for time magic! It seems even if you didn't have the system, this body is still quite talented in time magic; almost as good as Fletcher!}
This is a biased review. Grand Void Daoist was the first author whose novels I truly enjoyed and was willing to pay for thus I am giving 5 stars just cause.
